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46 words on love.

love is cruel.

this conclusion must be met

by even

the most prolific of dreamers-

and the problem lies

in the gift itself.

Love has to be a two way street

and in the words

“I love you, too”

deception assassinates

the hopes of

the lover.

6 responses

  1. Sig Avatar
    Sig

    Bleak view, but well spoken

  2. Julie Jordan Scott Avatar

    the final three lines swept me away.

    Beautiful.

  3. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom Avatar
    Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom

    hmmm… pretty melancholic… nice poem.

  4. Jingle Avatar

    well expressed love massage.
    thanks for sharing..
    ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Olivia Avatar

    It couldn’t be any more precise!
    If not reciprocated, the essence is killed!

    Well said my friend xoxox

  6. Promising Poets Parking Lot Avatar

    fabulous expressions..
    well penned,

    join us if you can…

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